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Submitted: March 16, 2008
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Make: Canon
Model: Canon EOS 5D
Shutter Speed: 1/15 second
F Number: F/16.0
Focal Length: 56 mm
ISO Speed: 100
Date Picture Taken: Mar 15, 2008, 6:09:44 PM

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First Time Models, Leah and David. (yes she has a mark on the leg and yes its a bit oily...please post the obvious) :)

This was a shoot designed for the both of them to play have fun. This image was actually the '1st' in the series, which I will do some test lights and position the models.

I uploaded this because I felt that overall it was a good image, in spite of the flaws. I believe i have another image where during this encounter, they busted out laughing because the whole scene was just silly.

I am proud of them, as first time models they gave it their best effort, and while some obvious flaws are here, I hope you enjoy it for what it is.

Fun and Real
Daily Deviation, 2008-04-21

Daily DeviationGlamour Week kicks off with Wowzers by =Silverpine. An incredible shot that is both simple and eye popping at the same time. It grabs your attention and doesn't let go. (Suggested by =jezebe11e and Featured by ^Ghouldaddy)

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She is to pretty for him...

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his expression is priceless! i really like the diagonal movement you captured here as well.

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"In the beginning, the Universe was created. This made a lot of people angry, and has been widely regarded as a bad idea."--Hitchhiker's Guide
great colors and very nice lighting :nod:
nicely posed too.

i have just a couple of minor issues: her legs look much darker than her arms and shoulders, almost looks like they belong to another girl.
and, i know what i'm going to say won't sound very nice, but i'm saying it just because the picture already looks like it's been heavily processed with photoshop so one healing brush more won't make much difference: you could try to clean up the marks on her leg, just above his hand. it's a very little detail, but since you're going for a magazine look :shrug:

Marcello
great work

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I agree with your comments, there is definately more work required on this photo to make it magazine quality.

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i'd really like to know where his other hand's at...lmao great shot :)

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hehe woops seen it now :D

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Nice shot.

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As my artist's statement explains, my work is utterly incomprehensible and is therefore full of deep significance.
- Bill Watterson, Calvin and Hobbes cartoon strip
this is great shot! :)
I second the healing brush call, that scar or whatever it is is really distracting and dosen't fit in the overall look. This is not a case where honesty is an issue since the whole thing is eye candy.

Good work.

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